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Sta.sh
I'd like to start off by saying that this is a great drawing.
Cars are hard to draw, so I think I can help you a bit.
Let's start off with what's wrong:
- The front-right wheel is missing
- Grill at the front of the car is warped
- Car leaning to the left.
Okay, so since the front-right wheel is missing, all you need to do is draw it in. It shouldn't be that hard.
The grill at the front of the car appearing warped was unintended, I'm sure. However, I think that you can fix this my making all the lines in the middle of the grill perfectly horizontal, instead of sideways.
Lastly, the fact that the car is leaning to the left can be corrected making the top of the car (where the roof is) level with the floor.
I hope this helps.
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